Kia Ora, Tiana! I really like your poem about the southern lights. The funniest one was when you said that people pull out their telescopes, it sounds like something I would do! Maybe next time you can change the colour of the poem because it was hard to see. I also enjoyed reading about the moustache. I think it looks photoshopped too.
I'm so happy to see another awesome post from you.
You have used some great descriptive language in your acrostic poem. I really like 'darkness hits'. It congers up a strong image of the night time emerging. Do you enjoy writing poems? Acrostic poems can be a lot of fun to write because you have the original word there to guide you.
I also see a moustache. Down the bottom of the picture I see a mushroom. Can you see it?
Hi Tiana, Great job on completing this activity! I like how you talked about the possibility of the image being photo shopped, as it is a huge problem for society these days. Also, do you feel sorry for the sisters? I know that they were trying to kill Mitai's brothers, but being stuck in the sky must be very lonely.
Kia Ora, Tiana!
ReplyDeleteI really like your poem about the southern lights. The funniest one was when you said that people pull out their telescopes, it sounds like something I would do! Maybe next time you can change the colour of the poem because it was hard to see. I also enjoyed reading about the moustache. I think it looks photoshopped too.
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Hi Gargee,
DeleteThank you for the feedback!
Tiana
Hi Tiana
ReplyDeleteI'm so happy to see another awesome post from you.
You have used some great descriptive language in your acrostic poem. I really like 'darkness hits'. It congers up a strong image of the night time emerging. Do you enjoy writing poems? Acrostic poems can be a lot of fun to write because you have the original word there to guide you.
I also see a moustache. Down the bottom of the picture I see a mushroom. Can you see it?
Hi Izzy,
DeleteThank you for commenting, I do enjoy writing. I just noticed it.
Tiana
Hi Tiana,
ReplyDeleteGreat job on completing this activity! I like how you talked about the possibility of the image being photo shopped, as it is a huge problem for society these days. Also, do you feel sorry for the sisters? I know that they were trying to kill Mitai's brothers, but being stuck in the sky must be very lonely.