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Monday 14 May 2018

Honour your writing as if it is gold (Anzac) - Writing

For writing we had to use our senses and imagine we were in the war then we had to put them into sentences. And we also had to honour our writing as if it is gold! 

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  1. Hey Tiana,

    Wow! This is a great piece of writing filled with amazing vocabulary. I really liked the way you described the bullets soaring past and the bodies laying on the ground. I get such a clear image of what's happenening.

    Tino Pai Rawa

    Mrs Faalili

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  2. Hi Mrs Faalili,

    Thank you!

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